Salam semangat kawan :)Ini dia contoh cerpen versi bahasa Inggris yang telah aku buat dengan judul "Loyality", wuiiiiih dari judulnya aja kayag romantis gimanaaaa gitu yaaaa, apalagi ceritanya, heheeMakanya dibaca yaaa sampai selesai biar pada tau. Oh yaaa, seperti postingan* sebelumnya,,, mohon kritikan dari cerpen ini yaa karena pasti ada kesalahannya. heheManusia tempatnya salah dan lupa. Jadi butuh masukan dari temen-temen yang udah lihai/jago bahasa Inggris. heethanks :)
LOYALITY
One upon a time, in
a small village, there was a man, his name was Paijo. He lived with
his wife, they were love and care
mutually. His wife name’s was Zaitun, she was very
beautiful woman
and there were many men who like
herself, and she also patient woman. While Paijo was
handsome enough and he just a
fisherman. Paijo was very lucky because he got a beautiful wife as
Zaitun. Although Paijo was handsome enough, but
he had goodness, diligence, sincerity and responsible to his
wife. Paijo and Zaitun were new couple (bride and
bridegroom), but they separated from their parents,
because they wanted to stand alone without their parents.
In happy evening, Paijo and Zaitun
were sitting at yard of house and enjoying the beautiful
evening and also joking mutually, Paijo began
talking:
Paijo: Honey, make me a glass
of tea, please!
Then, Zaitun answered : Ok
honey, wait a moment…
Zaitun was going to the kitchen
and made a glass of tea to her beloved husband. And Zaitun
also brought a bottle of water to herself.
(after several
minutes, Zaitun was coming……)
Zaitun: This is tea for you
honey, and the water for me.
Honey, before it, I’m so sorry because the sugar is up,
there is a little of sugar, so. I don’t think the
tea is sweet. L
Paijo: Really my honey?
Hmmmmmmmm ok no problem. I
want to drink it now.
After Paijo drank
the tea, Paijo was commenting : Hmmmmm
the tea is so sweet
honey. Although just the tea is
given a little of sugar.
Zaitun: Don’t lie me honey, I don’t
like it.
Paijo: I don’t lie honey, it is my honesty. The tea is so
sweet if I drink it by see you honey J
Zaitun: iiiiiiiikhh,,, you’re so naughty, you make
me shy honey. LOL :D
(with her shy face), but the joke has
staled honey. LOL :D
Paijo: Never mind
honey, I want to joke with you before I go.
Zaitun: (Sad) don’t
say it honey, make me sad. L
Paijo: Don’t be sad
honey, if u be like that, so enough here.
Let’s enter at our sweet home.
Then,
they entered to their
sweet home, and Paijo calmed his wife to not
sad. Zaitun sad because she would be left Paijo to work
(sail).
The day was not waited was
coming. Paijo was making preparations to go sail and asking permission
and prayer to Zaitun. And not forget, Paijo also adviced Zaitun
to
always careful and not left her
worship to God. Paijo also adviced his wife to always
communicate with
him by phone or facebook. (Although
Paijo just a fisherman and live
in a small village, but he also associated with this modern era. L.O.L).
When Paijo has
gone, there were many men who brave to tempt Zaitun.
There were many handsome and rich men who like her. But, Zaitun
still on unassailability of her faith. In her heart, only there was
‘PAIJO’s name forever’. After this incident, Zaitun tried to call Paijo by phone. They asked news
and told about experiences
mutually. Zaitun told about herself to Paijo.
After Paijo listened story of Zaitun,
Paijo very angry with men who
brave to tempt Zaitun. Paijo very concerned to his wife. He
patiently advised zaitun to always keep their relationships. And when they were
communicating, there was a problem on the phone network (trouble). Finally they
broke up to communication.
And the
next day, Paijo tried to contact Zaitun, but there was not reply. So, he tried
to text her. After Zaitun read the text from Paijo, she so sad and cry, how
Paijo wise and romantic in established his household. Zaitun shed her tears,
not crying because she had been left Paijo, but she was glad to had a husband
as Paijo.
After several
months, Paijo went home safely, Zaitun was so excited. They hug each other
because miss and love them. Paijo also excited because he could meet Zaitun
again. They began their new life. And finally they have 2 boys and 2 beautiful
daughters. The family of Paijo had completed. And they feel very happy.
